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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village<em>. </em> v.3

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village<em>. </em> v. 3
The diagram outlines the development that the Chorleywood village of London witnessed between 1868 and 1994. Overall, development works in this village were done in different periods and much of these constructions were done between 1970 and 1994. Interestingly, transportation facility defined the are of development in this village. According to the diagram, the motor road was established in 1970 while the railway was built in 1909 in Chorleywood. Before 1900, only a portion of the village was developed and later (between 1883 and 1922) the station was built and some development works were finished. The area near the station was then improved and during the end of this construction, in 1970 to be precise, the motorway was completed. After 1970, the expansion process seemed accelerated and many areas of the village came under the renovation process. At the beginning of 20th century, the railway was built. The land roads including the motorway, roads and railroads of this village connect almost all of the parts of the city and forms and hash like shape. The progress in this area had been done mostly based on the establishment of the transportation systems but the park and the golf course were placed in the middle of the village.
The diagram outlines the
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development
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Chorleywood
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village
of London witnessed between 1868 and 1994.
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,
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development
works in this
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village
were done
in
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different
periods and much of these constructions
were done
between 1970 and 1994.
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, transportation facility defined
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the are
of
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development
in this village.

According to the diagram, the motor road
was established
in 1970 while the railway
was built
in 1909 in
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Chorleywood
.
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Before
1900,
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only
a portion of the
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village
was developed
and later (between 1883 and 1922) the station
was built
and
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some
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development
works
were finished
. The area near the station was then
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improved
and during the
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end
of this construction, in 1970 to be precise, the motorway
was completed
. After 1970, the expansion process seemed accelerated and
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many
areas of the
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village
came under the renovation process. At the beginning of 20th century, the railway
was built
.

The land roads including the motorway, roads and railroads of this
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village
connect almost
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all of the
parts of the city and forms and hash like shape. The progress in this area had
been done
mostly
based on the establishment of the transportation systems
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but
the park and the golf course
were placed
in the middle of the
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village
.
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IELTS academic Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village<em>. </em> v. 3

Academic
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3 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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