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The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. v.3

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. v. 3
The map shows two potential locations for a new school in the town of Canterbury. We can see that the main difference between the proposed sites is that the first site (S1) is in the countryside, while the second site (S2) is in the heart of the town center. Additionally, S1 is the only location which lies on the main road. According to the map, S1 is outside in the town to the northeast of Canterbury, but this site is within easy reach of the housing zone. Meanwhile, S2 is also surrounded by the residential area. Neither site can take advantage of the University site, which is close to the town and borders in the countryside. There are two main roads from Chartham and Sturry to Canterbury town center. However, there is a central no traffic zone, this is unable to reach S2 by car. Additionally, The town of Sturry is only 5 kilometers from S1 along the main road. S2 is an ideal location for population coming from Chartham by the main road.
The map
shows
two potential locations for a new school in the
town
of Canterbury.

We can
see
that the
main
difference between the proposed
sites
is that the
first
site
(S1) is in the countryside, while the second
site
(S2) is in the heart of the
town
center.
Additionally
, S1 is the
only
location which lies on the
main
road.

According to the map, S1 is outside in the
town
to the northeast of Canterbury,
but
this
site
is within easy reach of the housing zone. Meanwhile, S2 is
also
surrounded by the residential area. Neither
site
can take advantage of the University
site
, which is close to the
town
and borders in the countryside.

There are two
main
roads from
Chartham
and
Sturry
to Canterbury
town
center.
However
, there is a central no traffic zone, this is unable to reach S2 by car.
Additionally
, The
town
of
Sturry
is
only
5 kilometers from S1 along the
main
road. S2 is an ideal location for population coming from
Chartham
by the
main
road.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. v. 3

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4 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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