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The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. v.3

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. v. 3
The map shows two potential locations for a new school in the town of Canterbury. We can see that the main difference between the proposed sites is that the first site (S1) is in the countryside, while the second site (S2) is in the heart of the town center. Additionally, S1 is the only location which lies on the main road. According to the map, S1 is outside in the town to the northeast of Canterbury, but this site is within easy reach of the housing zone. Meanwhile, S2 is also surrounded by the residential area. Neither site can take advantage of the University site, which is close to the town and borders in the countryside. There are two main roads from Chartham and Sturry to Canterbury town center. However, there is a central no traffic zone, this is unable to reach S2 by car. Additionally, The town of Sturry is only 5 kilometers from S1 along the main road. S2 is an ideal location for population coming from Chartham by the main road.
The map
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two potential locations for a new school in the
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town
of Canterbury.

We can
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that the
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main
difference between the proposed
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sites
is that the
first
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site
(S1) is in the countryside, while the second
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site
(S2) is in the heart of the
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town
center.
Additionally
, S1 is the
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only
location which lies on the
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main
road.

According to the map, S1 is outside in the
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town
to the northeast of Canterbury,
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but
this
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site
is within easy reach of the housing zone. Meanwhile, S2 is
also
surrounded by the residential area. Neither
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site
can take advantage of the University
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site
, which is close to the
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town
and borders in the countryside.

There are two
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main
roads from
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Chartham
and
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Sturry
to Canterbury
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town
center.
However
, there is a central no traffic zone, this is unable to reach S2 by car.
Additionally
, The
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town
of
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Sturry
is
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only
5 kilometers from S1 along the
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main
road. S2 is an ideal location for population coming from
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Chartham
by the
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main
road.
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IELTS academic The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. v. 3

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  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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