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The chart below shoes the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. v.1

The chart below shoes the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. v. 1
The line graphs below illustrate comparisons the percentage of man and women teacher in six different variety of educational setting of the UK in 2010. Overall, it be able to the most obvious pieces of information the girls absolutely select nursery or pre school, which the male prefer to university. Regarding to the data most popular demand component by girls, it was the nursery or pre-school which was stood at almost 100%, the same of primary school at almost 90%. Furthermore, in university became the most decreased percentage on the period. Only went down about 75%. While on secondary school, college and private training institute also falling significantly to approximately between 60% and 40%. Unlike with the case above, the boys happened largest sharply increased, which started from nursery get 0, 1% then it reached a peak in university dramatically. Then, the second biggest percentage in private training institute which counted at 45%.
The line graphs below illustrate comparisons the percentage of
man
and women teacher in six
different
variety of educational setting of the UK in 2010.

Overall
, it
be
able to the most obvious pieces of information the girls
absolutely
select nursery or
pre
school, which the male prefer to university.

Regarding to
the data most popular demand component by girls, it was the nursery or
pre-school
which
was stood
at almost 100%, the same of primary school at almost 90%.
Furthermore
, in university became the most decreased percentage on the period.
Only
went down about 75%. While on secondary school, college and private training institute
also
falling
significantly
to approximately between 60% and 40%.

Unlike with the case above, the boys happened largest
sharply
increased, which
started
from nursery
get
0, 1% then it reached a peak in university
dramatically
. Then, the second biggest percentage in private training institute which counted at 45%.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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