The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. v.2
The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. v. 2
The line graph displays the changes in temperature in three cities (Paris, Dubai and Sydney) in different months of a year. Temperature is measured in Celsius degree.
Overall, the weather pattern in Sydney is quite the opposite of Dubai and Paris. Furthermore, Paris is the coldest city among the three.
To begin with, the temperature in Paris never goes above 20 degrees. In contrast, Dubai seldom sees its temperature below this level, except for January (19 degree C). However, despite the striking differences, the temperatures in Paris and Dubai still have some similarities, as they rise continually from the beginning of the year to reach a peak in August. The highest temperature in Paris and Dubai are 20 and 36 degrees, respectively. Afterwards, both cities became colder and the temperature fell steadily. As can be seen, the differences in temperature between August and December in both Paris and Dubai are the same, 15 degrees celsius.
Regarding Sydney, it witnesses 24 degree temperature in January. From there, the temperature drops continuously before going down to the lowest point of 14 degrees in July. The five remaining months see the temperature increase dramatically, to reach 23 degrees by the end of the year.
The line graph displays the
changes
in
temperature
in three cities (Paris, Dubai and Sydney) in
different
months of a year.
Temperature
is measured
in Celsius degree.
Overall
, the weather pattern in Sydney is quite the opposite of Dubai and Paris.
Furthermore
, Paris is the coldest city among the three.
To
begin
with, the
temperature
in Paris never goes above 20
degrees
.
In contrast
, Dubai seldom
sees
its
temperature
below this level,
except for
January (19
degree
C).
However
, despite the striking differences, the
temperatures
in Paris and Dubai
still
have
some
similarities, as they rise
continually
from the beginning of the year to reach a peak in August. The highest
temperature
in Paris and Dubai are 20 and 36
degrees
,
respectively
. Afterwards, both cities became colder and the
temperature
fell
steadily
. As can be
seen
, the differences in
temperature
between August and December in both Paris and Dubai are the same, 15
degrees
celsius
.
Regarding Sydney, it witnesses 24
degree
temperature
in January. From there, the
temperature
drops
continuously
before
going down to the lowest point of 14
degrees
in July. The five remaining months
see
the
temperature
increase
dramatically
, to reach 23
degrees
by the
end
of the year.
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