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The graph below shows total internet users in Vietnam from 2003 to the second quarter 2012. v.1

The graph below shows total internet users in Vietnam from 2003 to the second quarter 2012. v. 1
The bar chart delineates how the internet users in Vietnam developed from the beginning of 2003 to the second quarter of 2012 according to the data provided by the Vietnam Internet Network Information Center. As is obvious, the internet subscribers in Vietnam increased steadily throughout the period. According to the diagram, 3. 1 million Vietnamese used the internet in 2003 which more than doubled in just 1 year. After another year, total internet users in Vietnam exceeded 10 million and in 2006 another 4 million new users emerged. During 2006 and 2008, the number of such netizens (people who are connected to the internet) doubled, accounting somewhat 21 million total users. It is worth noticing that the number of new internet subscribers kept on increasing in Vietnam throughout the period and in 2011, their number went as high as 30 million, ten times higher than that of 2003. During the second quarter of 2012, the Vietnamese internet subscribers reached a record high, 31. 2 million with 0. 6 million new users in just six months.
The bar chart delineates how the internet
users
in Vietnam developed from the beginning of 2003 to the second quarter of 2012 according to the data provided by the Vietnam Internet Network Information Center. As is obvious, the internet subscribers in Vietnam increased
steadily
throughout the period.

According to the diagram, 3. 1
million
Vietnamese
used
the internet in 2003 which more than doubled in
just
1 year. After another year, total internet
users
in Vietnam exceeded 10
million
and in 2006 another 4
million
new
users
emerged. During 2006 and 2008, the number of such netizens (
people
who
are connected
to the internet) doubled, accounting somewhat 21
million
total
users
. It is worth noticing that the number of new internet subscribers
kept
on increasing in Vietnam throughout the period and in 2011, their number went as high as 30
million
, ten times higher than that of 2003. During the second quarter of 2012, the Vietnamese internet subscribers reached a record high, 31. 2
million
with 0. 6
million
new
users
in
just
six months.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic The graph below shows total internet users in Vietnam from 2003 to the second quarter 2012. v. 1

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