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The graphs below show the number of visitors to two cities in a given year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant v.2

The graphs below show the number of visitors to two cities in a given year.
The two bar graphs illustrates the quantity of tourists in two metropolitan in an Annum From January to July, the number of tourists in Seattle followed and increasing trend, rising from around 200000 to 20000000. It remained constant from July to august at 20000000. From August to September, The figure of tourists decreased from 20000000 to 2500000. The figure of tourists experienced a remarkable decline from October to November, declining from 2500000 to 200000 From January to July, the figure of tourists made a fascinating improvement, elevating from around 200000 to 4000000. The quantity of tourists remained same from July to august at 4000000. From August to november, number of tourists plunged from 4000000 to 500000. In december, the figure of tourist showed handsome improvement, rising from 500000 to 2500000 As far comparison is concerned, both tourist places showed magnificent improvement during mid-year and then faced downfall after remaining constant in july and august.
The two bar graphs illustrates the quantity of
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in two metropolitan in an
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From January to July, the number of
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in Seattle followed and increasing trend, rising from around 200000 to 20000000. It remained constant from July to
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august
at 20000000. From August to September, The
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figure
of
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decreased from 20000000 to 2500000. The
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of
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experienced a remarkable decline from October to November, declining from 2500000 to 200000

From January to July, the
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figure
of
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made a fascinating improvement, elevating from around 200000 to 4000000. The quantity of
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remained same from July to
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at 4000000. From August to
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november
, number of
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plunged from 4000000 to 500000. In
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december
, the
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figure
of
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showed
handsome improvement, rising from 500000 to 2500000

As far comparison
is concerned
, both
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places
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magnificent improvement during mid-year and then faced downfall after remaining constant in
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and august.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the number of visitors to two cities in a given year.

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