The graph below shows the way people of some country invested their money during the years 2001-2006. v.2
The graph below shows the way people of some country invested their money during the years 2001-2006. v. 2
The graph illustrate; how, a certain country invested their money at the stock market from 2001 to 2006.
Overall, the stocks were higher throughout the period above the bonds. Similarly more bond and stocks were noticeable in the same year, as well as, the least. It is of note, that the higher the stocks, the more bonds throughout given period.
In terms of stocks, they were higher at 311 billion in 2006, as opposed to 188 bonds in the same year. The least amount put on the market to purchase bonds was 100 billion in 2001 and few stocks of 210 billion were available on the market in the same year.
Furthermore, it can be clearly seen that, from 2001 to 2006, the stocks were doubling the prices of bonds. From 2001 to 2003, the stocks were going up gradually, but from 2004 to 2006 it began to fluctuate. The prices of bonds increased rapidly from 2001 to 2003, whilst for the last 3 years, it reduced the speed, as it rose steadily. It is of note, each year the prices of bonds and the stocks were increasing.
The graph illustrate; how, a certain country invested their money at the stock market from 2001 to 2006.
Overall
, the stocks were higher throughout the period above the bonds.
Similarly
more bond and stocks were noticeable in the same
year
,
as well
as, the least. It is of note, that the higher the stocks, the more bonds throughout
given
period.
In terms of stocks, they were higher at 311 billion in 2006, as opposed to 188 bonds in the same
year
. The least amount put on the market to
purchase
bonds was 100 billion in 2001 and few stocks of 210 billion were available on the market in the same year.
Furthermore
, it can be
clearly
seen
that, from 2001 to 2006, the stocks were doubling the prices of bonds. From 2001 to 2003, the stocks were going up
gradually
,
but
from 2004 to 2006 it began to fluctuate. The prices of bonds increased
rapidly
from 2001 to 2003, whilst for the last 3 years, it
reduced
the speed, as it rose
steadily
. It is of note, each
year
the prices of bonds and the stocks were increasing.
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