The provided line graph shows information about the numbers of people who use the underground station in London around the clock of a typical day. As is observed from the graph, the busiest times at the underground station are 8: 00 am and 6: 00 pm.
The highest numbers of people use the station in the morning and more specifically at around 8: 00 in the morning. A rapid growth can be observed between 6: 00 am and 8: 00 am in the morning when around 400 people use the station at around 7: 30 am. This number then quickly drops to below 200 at around 10: 00 am. Again this number rises between 11: 00 and 3: 00 pm when around 300 people use the underground station with some fluctuations.
In the afternoon, this number decline, with less than 100 people using the station at 4: 00 pm. At 6: 00 pm this number reaches at 380. After 7: 00 pm, the total number of passengers declines significantly and fluctuates for the last two hours from 8: 00 pm to 10: 00 pm.
In summary, London underground station remains busy in the starting of the day at morning and in the early evening.

The provided line graph

shows

information about the

numbers

of

people

who

use

the

underground

station

in London

around

the clock of a typical day. As

is observed

from the graph, the busiest times at the

underground

station

are 8: 00 am and 6: 00 pm.

The highest

numbers

of

people

use

the

station

in the

morning

and more

specifically

at

around

8: 00 in the

morning

. A rapid growth can

be observed

between 6: 00 am and 8: 00 am in the

morning

when

around

400

people

use

the

station

at

around

7: 30 am. This

number

then

quickly

drops to below 200 at

around

10: 00 am. Again this

number

rises between 11: 00 and 3: 00 pm when

around

300

people

use

the

underground

station

with

some

fluctuations.

In the afternoon, this

number

decline, with less than 100

people

using the

station

at 4: 00 pm. At 6: 00 pm this

number

reaches at 380. After 7: 00 pm, the total

number

of passengers declines

significantly

and fluctuates for the last two hours from 8: 00 pm to 10: 00 pm.

In summary, London

underground

station

remains busy in the starting of the day at

morning

and in the early evening.

1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more

33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer

1Mistakes