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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. v.3

The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. v. 3
The given illustration compares oil production capacity of several Gulf countries namely Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, Qatar, Saudi Arabia and the UAE between 1990 and 2010. As is presented in the diagram, Saudi Arabia had the highest capacity of oil production and its production increased significantly. Initially, in 1990, Iraq & the UAE produced over 2 million barrels of oil per day whereas the production for Iran was 3 and for Kuwait and Qatar were less than 2 million Barrels. Saudi Arabia was the highest oil producing country that produced more than 8 million barrels daily in 1990. After 10 years, the oil production grew for all the countries except the UAE, where the production was same as it was a decade earlier. The trends of more oil production remained the same in all countries in 2005 except in Qatar. Finally, in 2010, Iran produced more than 4 million barrels daily, for Iraq, Kuwait & the UAE the production was nearly 4 million barrels. Saudi Arabia produced much more oil than other Gulf countries as it did for all the mentioned years and this in 2010 it was almost 15 million barrels per day.
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for Iran was 3 and for Kuwait and Qatar were less than 2
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more than 8
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daily in 1990. After 10 years, the
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grew for all the
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except the UAE, where the
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was same as it was a decade earlier. The trends of more
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remained the same in all
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in 2005 except in Qatar.

Finally
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as it did for all the mentioned years and this in 2010 it was almost 15
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IELTS academic The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. v. 3

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