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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. v.2

The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. v. 2
The bar chart compares the daily oil production in five Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Overall, oil generation in Saudi Arabia was the highest and Iran, Iraq, Kuwait and the UAE produced nearly the same amount of oil. As the diagram suggests, Saudi Arabia produced over 8 million barrels oil per day in 1990 which was the highest. Its production went as high as 15 million daily after 2 decades. It is worth noticing that, Saudi Arabia’s oil stock was somewhat similar to the rest of the countries collectively. Oil generating capacity in Iran, Iraq, Kuwait and the UAE was almost the same in 1990, around 2-3 million barrels daily. Over the time their production capacity developed and reached to around 4 million barrels in 2010. Iran’s production was marginally higher than that of Iraq, Kuwait and the UAE. The least amount of oil production could be observed in Qatar, less than 1 million barrel in 1990 and this capacity remained exactly the same there except in 2000 when its production slightly progressed.
The bar chart compares the daily
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in five Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
,
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generation in Saudi Arabia was the highest and Iran, Iraq, Kuwait and the UAE produced
nearly
the same amount of oil.

As the diagram suggests, Saudi Arabia produced over 8
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million
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barrels
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oil
per day in 1990 which was the highest. Its
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production
went as high as 15
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million
daily after 2 decades. It is worth noticing that, Saudi Arabia’s
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oil
stock was somewhat similar to the rest of the countries
collectively
.

Oil generating capacity in Iran, Iraq, Kuwait and the UAE was almost the same in 1990, around 2-3
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million
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barrels
daily. Over the time their
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production
capacity developed and reached to around 4
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million
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barrels
in 2010. Iran’s
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production
was
marginally
higher than that of Iraq, Kuwait and the UAE.

The least amount of
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production
could
be observed
in Qatar, less than 1
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million
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barrel
in 1990 and this capacity remained exactly the same there except in 2000 when its
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slightly
progressed.
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IELTS academic The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. v. 2

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6.5
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