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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. v.1

The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. v. 1
The column graph compares probable oil production capabilities of six Gulf countries from 1990 to 2010. Overall, Saudi Arabi was the leading oil generating country and its production increased faster than the remaining five countries. As is presented, the estimated oil producing capability in Iran in 1990 was around 3 million barrels each day which reached to 4 million after 15 years and finally in 2010, the production slightly improved. Iraq’s oil generating capability was slightly lower than that of Iran and its oil stock in 1990 was roughly 2 billion barrels per day and it almost doubled in 2010. Kuwait, on the contrary, produced less than 2 billion barrels daily and their production amount stool at approximately 3. 5 million in 2010. Moreover, Qatar, throughout the decades, produced the lowest oil which accounted for roughly 0. 5 million barrels each day and after two decades, its production level remained at the same level. Oil generation per day in the United Arab Emirates showed a similar pattern that of Iraq and its production reached to nearly 4 million barrels in 2010. Finally, Saudi Arabia’s oil generating level was the highest and significantly higher than that of other countries. In 1990, it produced over 8 million barrel daily which was approximately four times higher than that of other countries. Its daily production soared to well over 14 million barrel and this was marginally the same as the cumulative oil productions of other five countries.
The column graph compares probable
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oil
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production
capabilities of six Gulf
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countries
from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, Saudi
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was the leading
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oil
generating
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country
and its
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production
increased faster than the remaining five countries.

As
is presented
, the estimated
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oil
producing capability in Iran in 1990 was around 3
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million
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barrels
each day which reached to 4
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million
after 15 years and
finally
in 2010, the
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production
slightly
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improved
. Iraq’s
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oil
generating capability was
slightly
lower than that of Iran and its
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oil
stock in 1990 was roughly 2 billion
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barrels
per day and it almost doubled in 2010. Kuwait,
on the contrary
, produced less than 2 billion
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barrels
daily and their
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production
amount stool at approximately 3. 5
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million
in 2010.

Moreover
, Qatar, throughout the decades, produced the lowest
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oil
which accounted for roughly 0. 5
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million
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barrels
each day and after two decades, its
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production
level remained at the same level.
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Oil
generation per day in the United Arab Emirates
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showed
a similar pattern that of Iraq and its
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production
reached to
nearly
4
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million
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barrels
in 2010.

Finally
, Saudi Arabia’s
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oil
generating level was the highest and
significantly
higher than that of other
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countries
. In 1990, it produced over 8
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million
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barrel
daily which was approximately four times higher than that of other
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countries
. Its daily
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production
soared to well over 14
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million
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barrel
and this was
marginally
the same as the cumulative
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oil
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productions
of other five
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countries
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. v. 1

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4 paragraphs
243 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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