The charts present data on the number of Japanese holidaymakers who travelled overseas over 11 years, from 1985 to 1995, and the percentage of Japanese tourist market for Australia. It is evident from the graphs that more Japanese toured overseas during this period and the number of Australia visiting travellers soared.
As the illustration suggests, from 5 million holidaymakers in 1985, the number of Japan's travellers experienced an exponential growth to somewhere in the vicinity of 11 million in 1990 before decreasing slightly in 1991. Furthermore, its rate soared again from almost 12 millions in 1992 to just over 14 millions in 1995. Moreover, from a negligible 2 percent in 1985, the percentage of Japan's tourist market rose gradually approximately 5 percent before falling back to somewhere 4. 5 percent in 1990. In addition, its percentage reached a peak more than 6 percent in 1994 and fell back to 6 percent in 1995. It is evident that more Japanese travelled Australia in later years that they did in early years and the growth was steady.
The charts present data on the number of Japanese holidaymakers who travelled overseas over 11 years, from 1985 to 1995, and the percentage of Japanese tourist market for Australia. It is evident from the graphs that more Japanese toured overseas during this period and the number of Australia visiting
travellers
soared.
As the illustration suggests, from 5
million
holidaymakers in 1985, the number of Japan's
travellers
experienced an exponential growth to somewhere in the vicinity of 11
million
in 1990
before
decreasing
slightly
in 1991.
Furthermore
, its rate soared again from almost 12
millions
in 1992 to
just
over 14
millions
in 1995.
Moreover
, from a negligible 2
percent
in 1985, the percentage of Japan's tourist market rose
gradually
approximately 5
percent
before
falling back to somewhere 4. 5
percent
in 1990.
In addition
, its percentage reached a peak more than 6
percent
in 1994 and fell back to 6
percent
in 1995. It is evident that more Japanese travelled Australia in later years that they did in early years and the growth was steady.
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