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The graph below shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The graph below shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005
The graph highlights data about the number of people who visited museums in three different countries, namely MET Museums (New York), Edo Museum (Tokyo), and National Museum (China), over a half-decade between 2000 and 2005. Overal, what stands out from the graph is that visitors of both MET museum and National Museum increased in numbers, whereas the number of people who visited Edo Museum fluctuated significantly over the period. Another interesting point is that Edo Museum, which had more visitors than other museums at the beginning, had fewer visitors than others in 2005. On contrary, the least popular museum in 2000, National Museum, became the most popular museum in 2005. Looking at the details, with respect to the visitors of MET Museum, it began at approximately 12 million visitors in 2000, then it plunged to just around 6 millions over the next two years until 2002. Then, the figure went up rapidly, finishing at around 14 million visitors in 2005. This trend also followed by National Museum. Despite increased steadily over the first four years until 2003, at just over 10 million people, the number of visitors then remained steady until 2004. In 2005, the figure began to rose sharply reaching nearly 16 million, which was the highest number of visitors compared to other museums. In contrast to MET Museum and National Museum, the number of people who visited Edo Museum went in the opposite direction. Having remained stable over the first two years at just under 14 million visitors until 2001, the figure then fluctuated to around 6 million by 2003. After that, despite plummeting, the figure then started to go up gradually and ended at approximately 10 million people in the last two years.
The graph highlights data about the
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increased in
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at the beginning, had fewer
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than others in 2005. On contrary, the least popular
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in 2000,
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National
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went in the opposite direction. Having remained stable
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005

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