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The given bar chart indicates a comparison of Australian genders with the exact percents who do exercises frequently according to their various age groups As can be seen from the chart males did more physical exercises than females at the age of 15 to 24 v. 2

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

IELTS academic The given bar chart indicates a comparison of Australian genders with the exact percents who do exercises frequently according to their various age groups As can be seen from the chart males did more physical exercises than females at the age of 15 to 24 v.2

The bar chart below
shows
the percentage of Australian
men
and women in
different
age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
Academic
1 paragraphs
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