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Although you have never formally studied computing. You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the v.2

Although you have never formally studied computing. You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter to express my interest for the computer course in your college. My name is smita. I am working as an accountant in xyz company. I came to know about this course While surfing on the internet. I am keenly interested in doing this but there is one exception that I do not have elementary certificate of this. Here, I would like to explain the reason firstly I am an accountant so I do not get time to do elementary course but I know the basics of computers properly even I do most of accounting on computer. Secondly, I feel my presentations are quite simple so to improve my productivity I am interesed in this course. Therefore, I will be able to use advance features of presentations and used it for other purposes. I just want to request that please consider my application for this course under exception. If you want me to give test of elementary course, then I will be ready to give exam. I also have my presentations and projects to show. Please choose any way whichever is more convenient to you. Looking for a positive reply. Yours faithfully Smita
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter to express my interest for the computer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in your college.

My name is
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smita
. I am working as an accountant in
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xyz
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company
. I came to know about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
While surfing on the internet.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
keenly
interested in doing this
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but
there is one exception that I do not have elementary certificate of this.

Here, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
the reason
firstly
I am an accountant
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so
I do not
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get
time to do elementary
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course
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I know the basics of computers
properly
even I do
Consider using "most accounting" or "most of the accounting".
most of accounting
on computer.
Secondly
, I feel my presentations are quite simple
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so
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
my productivity I am
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interesed
in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
.
Therefore
, I will be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
advance features of presentations and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
it for other purposes.

I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
want to request that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
consider my application for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
under exception. If you want me to give
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
of elementary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
, then I will be ready to give exam. I
also
have my presentations and projects to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
choose any way whichever is more convenient to you.

Looking for a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reply.

Yours
faithfully


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Smita
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
If we spoke a different language, we would perceive a somewhat different world.
Ludwig Wittgenstein

IELTS academic Although you have never formally studied computing. You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the v. 2

Academic
  American English
8 paragraphs
198 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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