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Although you have never formally studied computing. You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the v.2

Although you have never formally studied computing. You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter to express my interest for the computer course in your college. My name is smita. I am working as an accountant in xyz company. I came to know about this course While surfing on the internet. I am keenly interested in doing this but there is one exception that I do not have elementary certificate of this. Here, I would like to explain the reason firstly I am an accountant so I do not get time to do elementary course but I know the basics of computers properly even I do most of accounting on computer. Secondly, I feel my presentations are quite simple so to improve my productivity I am interesed in this course. Therefore, I will be able to use advance features of presentations and used it for other purposes. I just want to request that please consider my application for this course under exception. If you want me to give test of elementary course, then I will be ready to give exam. I also have my presentations and projects to show. Please choose any way whichever is more convenient to you. Looking for a positive reply. Yours faithfully Smita
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter to express my interest for the computer
course
in your college.

My name is
smita
. I am working as an accountant in
xyz
company
. I came to know about this
course
While surfing on the internet.
I
am
keenly
interested in doing this
but
there is one exception that I do not have elementary certificate of this.

Here, I would like to
explain
the reason
firstly
I am an accountant
so
I do not
get
time to do elementary
course
but
I know the basics of computers
properly
even I do
most of accounting
on computer.
Secondly
, I feel my presentations are quite simple
so
to
improve
my productivity I am
interesed
in this
course
.
Therefore
, I will be able to
use
advance features of presentations and
used
it for other purposes.

I
just
want to request that
please
consider my application for this
course
under exception. If you want me to give
test
of elementary
course
, then I will be ready to give exam. I
also
have my presentations and projects to
show
.
Please
choose any way whichever is more convenient to you.

Looking for a
positive
reply.

Yours
faithfully


Smita
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS academic Although you have never formally studied computing. You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the v. 2

Academic
  American English
8 paragraphs
198 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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