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Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Percentage of water used for different purposes v.3

Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Percentage of water used for different purposes v. 3
The pie charts illustrate the portion of water consumed in various purposes in six regions of the globe. It can be seen in the charts that consumption of water in agricultural field are the most in regions except for North America and Europe, where water usages in industrial sectors are the highest. In Central Asia, agricultural sector uses water the highest, at 88%, followed by Africa and South East Asia, at 84% and 81% respectively. Moreover, South American uses most of the water in agriculture as well. However, the need of water for agricultural purposes in North America and Europe is the second highest component, at 39% and 32%. In contrast, while industries in North America and Europe use a major portion of water, factories in Africa and Central Asia consume the water the least. South East Asia and South America require more or less the same amount of water in industries. The usage of water in domestic needs is same in South and Central part of Asia, at 7%. Similarly, in North America and Europe consume the same level of water, while in Africa household water usages has been just below 10%.
The pie charts illustrate the portion of
water
consumed in various purposes in six regions of the globe. It can be
seen
in the charts that consumption of
water
in agricultural field are the most in regions
except for
North
America and Europe, where
water
usages in industrial sectors are the highest.

In Central Asia, agricultural sector
uses
water
the highest, at 88%, followed by Africa and South East Asia, at 84% and 81%
respectively
.
Moreover
, South American
uses
most of the
water
in agriculture
as well
.
However
, the need of
water
for agricultural purposes in
North
America and Europe is the second highest component, at 39% and 32%.

In contrast
, while industries in
North
America and Europe
use
a major portion of
water
, factories in Africa and Central Asia consume the
water
the least. South East Asia and South America require more or less the same amount of
water
in industries.

The usage of
water
in domestic needs is same in South and Central part of Asia, at 7%.
Similarly
, in
North
America and Europe consume the same level of
water
, while in Africa household
water
usages has been
just
below 10%.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Percentage of water used for different purposes v. 3

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4 paragraphs
193 words
6.5
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