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The figure gives information about smoking habit of the UK population by age Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The figure gives information about smoking habit of the UK population by age
The chart compares smoking habits of six different age groups of people living in the UK. It is clear that the majority of England citizens are non-smokers. Additionally, people tend to quit smoking as they get older. 16-24 age group has the highest rate of individuals who never smoke, at over 60%, while only less than 45% people aged 65 to 74 have never consumed tobacco. It is interesting to note that people in the ages of 25 and 34 are more likely to be a light smoker than other group, with more than 30% of those surveyed, compared to just only 10% of the oldest group. As regard to figures for heavy smokers, middle-aged citizens have the higher proportion of heavy smokers than any other groups. 45-54 age group has the highest percentage of heavy tobacco consumers, at around 15%, followed by 12% of people aged between 35 and 44. Meanwhile, the ex-smoker rates in two oldest groups are highest, at 40% and 25% respectively.
The chart compares smoking habits of six
different
age
groups
of
people
living in the UK.

It is
clear
that the majority of England citizens are non-smokers.
Additionally
,
people
tend to quit smoking as they
get
older.

16-24
age
group
has the highest rate of individuals who never smoke, at over 60%, while
only
less than 45%
people
aged 65 to 74 have never consumed tobacco. It is interesting to note that
people
in the
ages
of 25 and 34 are more likely to be a light smoker than other
group
, with more than 30% of those surveyed, compared to
just
only
10% of the oldest group.

As regard to figures for heavy smokers, middle-aged citizens have the higher proportion of heavy smokers than any other
groups
. 45-54
age
group
has the highest percentage of heavy tobacco consumers, at around 15%, followed by 12% of
people
aged between 35 and 44. Meanwhile, the ex-smoker rates in two oldest
groups
are highest, at 40% and 25%
respectively
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The figure gives information about smoking habit of the UK population by age

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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