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The diagram shows the production of circuit boards. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. v.1

The diagram shows the production of circuit boards.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing circuit boards. Overall, circuit-board production consists of nine stages. Three of the steps in the beginning are not repeated as well as last two steps. The first step in production of circuit boards is delivery material to the lab. After that it requires to cut and spray with fire retardant. The third step is cleaning circuit board. The fourth stage is automated IC attachment and soldering. The fifth step is visual inspection and quality control testing. Visual inspection and quality control testing may be taken two decisions. If inspection and quality control rejects chips they will be thrown away. If inspection and quality control approves they go to the final testing. Regarding to results of final testing it goes to the packing and delivery to factories or to automated IC attachment and soldering again. The cycle will be repeated until final testing will be agreed.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing circuit boards.

Overall
, circuit-board production consists of nine stages. Three of the
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steps
in the beginning are not repeated
as well
as last two steps.

The
first
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step
in production of circuit boards is delivery material to the lab. After that it requires to
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cut
and spray with fire retardant. The third
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step
is cleaning circuit board.

The fourth stage
is automated
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IC
attachment and soldering.
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The
fifth
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step
is visual
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inspection
and
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quality
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control
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testing
. Visual
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inspection
and
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quality
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control
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testing
may
be taken
two decisions. If
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inspection
and
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quality
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control
rejects chips they will
be thrown
away. If
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inspection
and
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quality
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control
approves they go to the final testing.

The phrase 'Regarding to' is not correct. Use "Regarding" or "regard to".
Regarding to
results of final
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testing
it goes to the packing and delivery to factories or to automated
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IC
attachment and soldering again. The cycle will
be repeated
until final
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testing
will be
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agreed
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The diagram shows the production of circuit boards.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
152 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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