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The diagram shows the process of either recycling plastic items to produce goods or trash into dust bins to fill land v.2

The diagram shows the process of either recycling plastic items to produce goods or trash into dust bins to fill land v. 2
The diagram describes the two methods of dealing with plastic waste, either dumping them in landfill sites or recycling them. Overall, it can be seen that the recycling process is more complex than the process of dumping the waster in landfill sites. The plastic waste that is not intended to be recycled, will go through 3 phases. First, the customers buy the plastic products from the shops and use them. Next, after using the products, the customers put them into waste bins or litter them on the ground. The plastic waste is then collected and dumped into a landfill site. The recycling process consists of 6 stages. It begins with the plastic products being bought and used. They are then brought to recycling collecting points. After sorting them out in the warehouses, they are loaded on trucks to be transported to the processing facilities. At these facilities, they are made into new products. The recycling process repeats itself after having these products distributed to the retail agencies.
The diagram
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describes
the two methods of dealing with
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plastic
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waste
, either dumping them in landfill sites or
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recycling
them.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the
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recycling
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process
is more complex than the
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process
of dumping the waster in landfill sites.

The
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plastic
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waste
that is
not intended to
be recycled
, will go through 3 phases.
First
, the customers
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buy
the
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plastic
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products
from the shops and
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use
them.
Next
, after using the
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products
, the customers put them into
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waste
bins or litter them on the ground. The
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plastic
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waste
is then collected and dumped into a landfill site.

The
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recycling
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process
consists of 6 stages. It
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begins
with the
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plastic
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products
being
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bought
and
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used
. They are then brought to
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recycling
collecting points. After sorting them out in the warehouses, they
are loaded
on trucks to
be transported
to the processing facilities. At these facilities, they
are made
into new
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products
. The
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recycling
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process
repeats itself after having these
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products
distributed to the retail agencies.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The diagram shows the process of either recycling plastic items to produce goods or trash into dust bins to fill land v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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