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The diagram below shows how thermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons wherever relevant. v.2

The diagram below shows how thermal energy is used to produce electricity.
The diagram provide information how electricity is generated from geothermal energy. Overall, there are five main steps to the process, from pumping cold water down into the geothermal zone, to producing electricity that is then sent into the electric grid. Firstly, cold water is pumped down through an injection 4. 5km underground to the geothermal zone, consisting of hot rocks. The cold water is then heated up by these rocks while flowing through to the opposite end. The heated water is then pumped up via the production well into the condenser. In the condenser, the hot water is condensed into steam. The steam is then transported to the turbine. As the steam moves through the turbine, it creates a spinning effect that powers the generator, thus producing electricity. The electricity generated is then transferred into the grid via power lines.
The diagram provide information how
electricity
is generated
from geothermal energy.

Overall
, there are five main steps to the process, from pumping
cold
water
down into the geothermal zone, to producing
electricity
that is
then
sent
into the electric grid.

Firstly
,
cold
water
is pumped
down through an injection 4.
5km
underground to the geothermal zone, consisting of hot rocks. The
cold
water
is then heated up by these rocks while flowing through to the opposite
end
. The heated
water
is then pumped up via the production well into the condenser.

In the condenser, the hot
water
is condensed
into steam. The steam is then transported to the turbine. As the steam
moves
through the turbine, it creates a spinning effect that powers the generator,
thus
producing
electricity
. The
electricity
generated is then transferred into the grid via power lines.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how thermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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