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The chart shows the amount of waste production by British households since 1990 with predictions until 2030. v.2

The chart shows the amount of waste production by British households since 1990 with predictions until 2030. v. 2
The line graph illustrates the number of waste production by households in the UK from 1990 with projections until 2030. Units are measured in kilograms. Overall, the number of waste production in Britain households was primarily on plastic, glass, metal, batteries, and organic, while paper remains stable. These figures are predicted to move up gradually, except that glass and paper relatively unchanged. It is noticeable that plastic waste was the highest production which started from roughly 45kg in 1990 and it has been envisaged to increase until 2030. Organic and glass had fluctuations years per years with 32kg and 30kg in 1990, respectively. Around 2017, Organic went up around 40kg, whereas glass stayed the same to about 32kg. The amount is foreseen to rise significantly, however, in 2030, glass outraced the organic with an approximation of about 50kg and 40kg respectively. Although metals had just above110 kg in 1990 as compared to batteries to around 13kg with little fluctuations on years, it has been projected that batteries slightly overlap metals in 2030 to almost 20kg and just below 20 respectively. Paper remains steadily decrease with around 12kg of waste produced.
The line graph illustrates the number of
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waste
production by households in the UK from 1990 with projections until 2030. Units
are measured
in kilograms.

Overall
, the number of
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waste
production in Britain households was
primarily
on plastic,
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glass
, metal, batteries, and
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organic
, while paper remains stable. These figures
are predicted
to
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move
up
gradually
, except that
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glass
and paper
relatively
unchanged.

It is noticeable that plastic
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waste
was the highest production which
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started
from roughly
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45kg
in 1990 and it has
been envisaged
to increase until 2030.
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Organic
and
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glass
had fluctuations years per years with
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32kg
and
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30kg
in 1990,
respectively
.
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Around
2017,
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Organic
went up
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around
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40kg
, whereas
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glass
stayed the same to about
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32kg
. The amount is foreseen to rise
significantly
,
however
, in 2030,
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glass
outraced the
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organic
with an approximation of about
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50kg
and
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40kg
respectively
.

Although metals had
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just
above110 kg in 1990 as compared to batteries to
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around
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13kg
with
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little
fluctuations on years, it has
been projected
that batteries
slightly
overlap metals in 2030 to almost
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20kg
and
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just
below 20
respectively
. Paper remains
steadily
decrease with
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around
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12kg
of
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waste
produced.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes
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IELTS academic The chart shows the amount of waste production by British households since 1990 with predictions until 2030. v. 2

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4 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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