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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce elcetricity.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce elcetricity.

academicProcessProcessGeothermal EnergyElectricity Production
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Overall Band Score: 6.5
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7
The task covers all stages of the process but lacks detailed explanations in some areas.
Lexical Resource
6
The vocabulary used is generally appropriate but somewhat repetitive with limited topic-specific terminology.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
The response follows a logical sequence of stages in the geothermal process but lacks clear transitions and formal structure markers.
Grammatical Range
6.5
The essay employs a mix of simple and complex sentences but could benefit from more varied sentence structures.

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