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The diagram below shows geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The diagram below shows geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The illustration presents how a geothermal power plant accumulates energy from the earth’s surface. Passing through 5 stages, starting from the biosphere then into the underground and back up where it is processed. The first step is the cold water gets pumped 4. 5 km deep into the ground. As it reaches the injection well, it flows into the geothermal zone where the hot rocks are situated heating the cold water before it arrives in the production well. From there, the cold water has become hot and is pumped up and stored in a condenser which collects the steam and connects it to a turbine that uses the steam to power on. As the turbine starts to function, an electricity generator uses the turbine power to produce electricity. Now, a renewable energy is produced; ready for various consumption.

The illustration presents how a geothermal power plant accumulates energy from the earth’s surface. Passing through 5 stages, starting from the biosphere then into the underground and back up where it is processed
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The first
 step is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 water This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 pumped 4. 5 km deep into the ground. As it reaches the injection well, it flows into the geothermal zone where the hot rocks are situated
 heating the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 water This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 it arrives in the production well. From there, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 water has become hot and is pumped
 up and stored in a condenser which collects the steam and connects it to a turbine that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
 the steam to power on. As the turbine This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 to function, an electricity generator This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
 the turbine power to produce electricity. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, a renewable energy is produced
; ready for various consumption. 

1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The diagram below shows geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Academic

American English

2 paragraphs

138 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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