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The bar chart below shows the number of students who choose certain university subjects in 2005. v.2

The bar chart below shows the number of students who choose certain university subjects in 2005. v. 2
The bar chart shows the number of students in thousand who chose to study different University subject in 2005. The number for each subject are divided into male and female students. In general terms, there was different between men' s and women' s choice of subjects. As can be seen from the bar chart show that Sciences and Mathematics were the most popular subjects for boy students ( about 20. 000 students and 18. 000 students respectively) in 2005 but it was not more popular with girl students. In contrast, almost no men ( only about two thousand students) chose to study languages and very few men chose to the arts ( nearly three thousand students). On the other hand, the most popular subjects for female students were less technical such as social sciences, languages and Literature. Social sciences was by far the most popular subject for women ( nearly 25. 000 students). However, very few female students chose to study mathenatics and law ( 4. 000 students and 5. 000 students respectively). Nevertheless, just as many men as women chose to study humanitics.
The bar chart
shows
the number of
students
in
thousand
who
chose
to
study
different
University
subject
in 2005. The number for each
subject
are divided
into male and female students.

In general
terms, there was
different
between
men&
#039; s and
women&
#039; s choice of subjects.

As can be
seen
from the bar chart
show
that Sciences and Mathematics were the most
popular
subjects
for boy
students
(
about 20. 000
students
and 18. 000
students
respectively
) in 2005
but
it was not more
popular
with girl
students
.
In contrast
, almost no
men
(
only
about two thousand
students)
chose
to
study
languages and
very
few
men
chose
to the arts
(
nearly
three thousand students).

On the other hand
, the most
popular
subjects
for female
students
were less technical such as social sciences, languages and Literature. Social sciences was by far the most
popular
subject
for women
(
nearly
25. 000
students)
.
However
,
very
few female
students
chose
to
study
mathenatics
and law
(
4. 000
students
and 5. 000
students
respectively
).
Nevertheless
,
just
as
many
men
as women
chose
to
study
humanitics
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the number of students who choose certain university subjects in 2005. v. 2

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