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The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six area of the world.

The six pie graph depict the diverse usage of water in six regions of the earth. Overall, while in North America and Europe, industry is the main consumer of water, in other areas water is used in agriculture more than other purpose. In addition the percentage of water used for agriculture in central Asia is more than the like purpose in other areas. Europe by more 50% of water resource is the first region whereas central Asia apply just 5% of water resource in industry. In addition, in Europe just 32% of water is consumed by agricultural activity, which it is less than any other area. Consumption patter in North America is so close to Europe by, 48%, 39% and 13% for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes respectively. The lowest usage of water in domestic activity, belong to central Asia and south east Asia (7%), south America but use more than 19% of water resource, highest amount for this purpose among the so-called regions. Although in Africa percentage of agricultural usage of water is less than central Asia by 84%, percentage two other purpose is more than Asia by 2%.

IELTS academic The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six area of the world. Summarize the information by selecting the main features and make comparison where relevant. v.2

The six pie graph depict the diverse usage of
water
in six regions of the earth.

Overall
, while in North America and Europe, industry is the main consumer of
water
, in
other
areas
water
is
used
in agriculture more than
other
purpose
. In
addition
the percentage of
water
used
for agriculture in
central Asia
is more than the like
purpose
in
other
areas.

Europe by more 50% of
water
resource is the
first
region whereas
central Asia
apply
just
5% of
water
resource in industry.
In addition
, in Europe
just
32% of
water
is consumed
by agricultural activity, which it is less than any
other
area. Consumption patter in North America is
so
close to Europe by, 48%, 39% and 13% for industrial, agricultural and domestic
purposes
respectively
.

The lowest usage of
water
in domestic activity, belong to
central Asia
and
south east
Asia (7%),
south America
but
use
more than 19% of
water
resource,
highest
amount for this
purpose
among the
so
-called regions. Although in Africa percentage of agricultural usage of
water
is less than
central Asia
by 84%, percentage two
other
purpose
is more than Asia by 2%.
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