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Check Your Text it's freeThe line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
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On graph we see usage of most popular types of meat in country of Europe.
Firstly, according to the picture, we can mention rapidly increase of chicken's popularity among population, parallel to dramatic drop of beef in years from 1993 to 2002 and lamb consumption at the same period, while fish usage is approximetly constant.
Secondly, we can see decrease trend in beef popularity, which started do down very fast from 1993 and doesn't seem like stop in near future. The same trend in lamb look a little bit better. Fall in it's usage launched in 1986 and went on till 2001, although last years it slowly grow. Chicken was third used meat in 1979, on the country now it is the top one in country and likely to stay so for future years.
In conclusion, meat usage in the country extremely changed and only fish perform relatively stable statistic.
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Overall Band Score: 5
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5
The task response addresses some aspects of the graph but misses key details and provides an incomplete overview. The analysis lacks depth, and some significant data points are not covered or inaccurately described.
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5
The lexical range is limited with frequent repetition and inappropriate word choices. Vocabulary lacks variety, and there are some inaccurate or awkward word usages.
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5.5
The writing is somewhat organized, but there are inconsistencies in paragraph structure and connection between ideas. Transitions are not smoothly executed, and there is a lack of clear logical progression.
Grammatical Range
5
Grammatical structures are basic, with limited use of complex sentences. There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as incorrect tense use and subject-verb agreement issues.
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