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The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. v.3

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. v. 3
The diagrams show the number of international tourists who travelled to the UK, and British residents who travelled outside from 1979 to 1999. The data also presents the top 5 countries where UK citizens travelled in 1999. Overall, the number of international tourists travelling in the UK kept on increasing after 1989, and more UK people travelled outside the UK than the number of tourists the UK received. According to the graph, around 10 million international tourists travelled the UK. And the number of UK residents who travelled outside was 2-3 million more. Both of these numbers kept on increasing gradually till 1986 and after that, the number of UK citizens travelling outside increased very sharply. The number of tourists the UK received also kept on increasing and reached over 25 million in 1999 while more than 50 million people travelled outside. The number of UK travellers who went to other countries was roughly double than the number of people who came to the UK for visiting. The second bar graph shows the countries UK citizens travelled in 1999 and among them France was their favourite destination where more than 10% of tourists travelled in1999. The second most visited country by UK people was Spain where about 8% of total UK tourists travelled. Other countries visited by UK tourists were the USA, Greece and Turkey where less than 5% UK tourists travelled in 1999.
The diagrams
show
the
number
of international
tourists
who
travelled
to the UK, and British residents
who
travelled
outside
from 1979 to 1999. The data
also
presents the top 5
countries
where UK citizens
travelled
in 1999.

Overall
, the
number
of international
tourists
travelling in the UK
kept
on increasing after 1989, and more UK
people
travelled
outside
the UK than the
number
of
tourists
the UK received.

According to the graph, around 10
million
international
tourists
travelled
the UK. And the
number
of UK residents
who
travelled
outside
was 2-3
million
more. Both of these
numbers
kept
on increasing
gradually
till 1986 and after that, the
number
of UK citizens travelling
outside
increased
very
sharply
. The
number
of
tourists
the UK received
also
kept
on increasing and reached over 25
million
in 1999 while more than 50
million
people
travelled
outside
. The
number
of UK
travellers
who
went to other
countries
was roughly double than the
number
of
people
who
came to the UK for visiting.

The
second bar graph
shows
the
countries
UK citizens
travelled
in 1999 and among them France was their
favourite
destination where more than 10% of
tourists
travelled
in1999.
The
second most visited
country
by UK
people
was Spain where about 8% of total UK
tourists
travelled
. Other
countries
visited by UK
tourists
were the USA, Greece and Turkey where less than 5% UK
tourists
travelled
in 1999.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
52Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. v. 3

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234 words
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