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the chart below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. v.2

the chart below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. v. 2
The line diagram gives information about the visits to and from the UK over two decades, and the bar diagram illustrates the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. At a glance, there is a gradual increase in the number of visitors, UK residents and overseas residents, travelling to and from the UK. Looking in the line graph, the visitors, citizens of UK and abroad residents, have reached summits in 1999 while the nadir points of both was in 1979. The zenith of the abroad visits by UK residents was approximately 55 million which differs from overseas travelers to UK significantly by around 30 million. The bar diagram projects the information that UK residents, travelling to abroad, have travelled more to the France (around 11 million) followed by the next popular country: Spain (around 9 million). Although there were less number of visitors from UK who visited USA and Greece, least visited to Turkey in 1999 (approximately 2 million).
The line diagram gives information about the visits to and from the UK over two decades, and the bar diagram illustrates the most popular countries visited by UK
residents
in 1999. At a glance, there is a gradual increase in the number of visitors, UK
residents
and overseas
residents
, travelling to and from the UK.

Looking in the line graph, the visitors, citizens of UK and abroad
residents
, have reached summits in 1999 while the nadir points of both was in 1979. The zenith of the abroad visits by UK
residents
was approximately 55
million
which differs from overseas travelers to UK
significantly
by around 30 million.

The bar diagram projects the information that UK
residents
, travelling to abroad, have travelled more to the France (around 11
million)
followed by the
next
popular country: Spain (around 9
million)
. Although there were less number of visitors from UK who visited USA and Greece, least visited to Turkey in 1999 (approximately 2
million)
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic the chart below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. v. 2

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
161 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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