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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. v.4

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. v. 4
The bar chart demonstrates what changes five major cities experienced in average house prices in the span of periods: 1990-1995 and 1996-2002, compared with the average home value of 1989. Overall, house buying costs went down considerably in New York, Tokyo and London between the period of 1990-1996 while it augmented dramatically in London with a gradual increase in New York and Madrid cities during 1996-2002. A closer look at the graph reveals the fact that average houses purchasing price during 1900-1995 in Tokyo and London decreased by approximately 7% compared with the average price in 1989. However, during the same period, Madrid and Frankfurt experienced a property price rise by about 1% and 1. 5% respectively. Looking at the figures between 1996-2002, average house price in London went up dramatically, almost 12%, the largest property price hike. Meanwhile, property prices upsurged by 5%, just below 5% and around 1% consecutively in New York, Madrid and Frankfurt. Interestingly, only London went through 5% decline in average price of houses over the same period of time.
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five major cities experienced in
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in the span of
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: 1990-1995 and 1996-2002, compared with the
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home value of 1989.
Overall
,
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buying costs went down
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in New York, Tokyo and London between the
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of 1990-1996 while it augmented
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in London with a gradual increase in New York and Madrid cities during 1996-2002.

A closer look at the graph reveals the fact that
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purchasing
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during 1900-1995 in Tokyo and London decreased by approximately 7% compared with the
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in 1989.
However
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, Madrid and Frankfurt experienced a property
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rise by about 1% and 1. 5%
respectively
.

Looking at the figures between 1996-2002,
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in London went up
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hike. Meanwhile, property
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upsurged by 5%,
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below 5% and around 1%
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in New York, Madrid and Frankfurt.
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London went through 5% decline in
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of
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over the same
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of time.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. v. 4

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