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the chart bellow shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 v.2

the chart bellow shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 v. 2
This bar chart shows the information about the families who owned and rented residences in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Overall, households in owned accommodation indicated a surge while household in rented accommodation showed a downward trajectory throughout the given time-period. In 1918, households in rented accommodation marked its highest percentage which is around 78 percent. By 1939 it has decreased approximately by 12 percent and remain constant in 1953. From 1953 rented accommodation showed steep decreased up to 2001. Households in owned increased rapidly from around 23 percent to almost 70 percent in 2001 then decreased to around 65 percent in 2011. In 1971 both accommodation types reported an equal percentage, which is 50 in percentage. By 1981 households in owned accommodation outraced households in rented by 20 percent. At the end of the time period households in owned accommodation surpassed the rented accommodation by a huge margin.
This bar chart
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shows
the information about the families who
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owned
and rented residences in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

Overall
,
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
indicated a surge while
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household
in rented
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accommodation
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showed
a downward trajectory throughout the
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given
time-period.

In 1918,
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households
in rented
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accommodation
marked its highest percentage which is around 78
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percent
. By 1939 it has decreased approximately by 12
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percent
and remain constant in 1953. From 1953 rented
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accommodation
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showed
steep decreased up to
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2001. Households
in
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owned
increased
rapidly
from around 23
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percent
to almost 70
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percent
in 2001 then decreased to around 65
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percent
in 2011. In 1971 both
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accommodation
types reported an equal percentage, which is 50 in percentage. By 1981
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
outraced
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households
in rented by 20
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percent
. At the
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end
of the time period
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
surpassed the rented
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accommodation
by a huge margin.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic the chart bellow shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 v. 2

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151 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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