The given bar graph gives information about exporting five types of products between 2015 and 2016. While the table illustrates the proportion of change in values for every type of exports compared to 2015.
In general, the initial impression from graph is the export earnings for petroleum products increased comparing with 2015. In contrast, the export earnings for gems and jewellery declined if compared with 2015. In addition, the change rate in values went up except for gems and jewellery between two given years.
The value for petroleum products was a little above 60 million dollars then grew up slightly to around 65 $ million. For engineered goods, the value increased by 5 million dollars between 2015 and 2016. While the pattern changed for gems and jewellery, it went down to 40 million from 44 million between 2015 and 2016. Turning to table, it can be seen that the change per cent went up 3%. Whilst the gems and jewellery decreased by 5. 18%. the highest changing rate happened in textiles products, it increased by 15. 24%.
The
given
bar graph gives information about exporting five types of
products
between 2015 and 2016. While the table illustrates the proportion of
change
in values for every type of exports compared to 2015.
In general
, the initial impression from graph is the export earnings for petroleum
products
increased comparing with 2015.
In contrast
, the export earnings for
gems
and
jewellery
declined if compared with 2015.
In
addition, the
change
rate in values went up
except for
gems
and
jewellery
between two
given
years.
The
value
for petroleum
products
was a
little
above 60
million
dollars then grew up
slightly
to around
65 $
million
. For engineered
goods
, the
value
increased by 5
million
dollars between 2015 and 2016. While the pattern
changed
for
gems
and
jewellery
, it went down to 40
million
from 44
million
between 2015 and 2016. Turning to table, it can be
seen
that the
change
per cent went up 3%. Whilst the
gems
and
jewellery
decreased by 5. 18%.
the
highest changing rate happened in textiles
products
, it increased by 15. 24%.
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