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The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. v.3

The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. v. 3
The bar chart compares the percentage of international graduates among various universities in eight different Canadian provinces from 2001 to 2006. Overall, the number of oversea graduates in all provinces increased over the period of 5 years. It also is clear that New Brunswick had the highest number of international graduates over the period as a whole. In 2001, New Brunswick witnessed the highest number of students coming from other countries, at approximately 7%. Nova Scotia and Quebec had the same figure and followed by new Brunswick, at 6%. In 2006, a considerable rise can be seen in the number of oversea graduates in New Brunswick and Nova Scotia, to 12% and just over 10% respectively. The figure for Quebec also rose, to approximately 8%. New Brunswick, however, remained consistently the top level of the number of international graduates. Accounting for nearly 5% in 2001, Both Alberta and BC saw an increase in the number of graduates coming from other countries, at approximately 7% in 2006. Similarly, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador and Ontario accounted for a minor percentage of oversea graduates, at 3% in 2001. Those figures had risen dramatically to around 6% by 2006.
The bar chart compares the percentage of international
graduates
among various universities in eight
different
Canadian provinces from 2001 to 2006.
Overall
, the
number
of oversea
graduates
in all provinces increased over the period of 5 years. It
also
is
clear
that
New
Brunswick had the highest
number
of international
graduates
over the period as a whole.

In 2001,
New
Brunswick witnessed the highest
number
of students coming from other countries, at approximately 7%. Nova Scotia and Quebec had the same figure and followed by
new Brunswick
, at 6%. In 2006, a considerable rise can be
seen
in the
number
of oversea
graduates
in
New
Brunswick and Nova Scotia, to 12% and
just
over 10%
respectively
. The figure for Quebec
also
rose, to approximately 8%.
New
Brunswick,
however
, remained
consistently
the
top level
of the
number
of international graduates.

Accounting for
nearly
5% in 2001, Both Alberta and BC
saw
an increase in the
number
of
graduates
coming from other countries, at approximately 7% in 2006.
Similarly
, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador and Ontario accounted for a minor percentage of oversea
graduates
, at 3% in 2001. Those figures had risen
dramatically
to around 6% by 2006.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. v. 3

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