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The charts below show the percentage water used fordifferent purposed in six areas of the world. Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant. v.2

The charts below show the percentage water used fordifferent purposed in six areas of the world.
The pie charts show the proportion of purpose of water usage from different six continents over the world, which are North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia. There are three types of water usage in each area, including industrial use, agricultural use, and domestic use. With regards to the percentage of water usage for agriculture, it is the most at 88% of Central Asia, following by 84%, 81%, and 71% of Africa, South East Asia and South America, respectively. Nevertheless, the two least proportion of water usage for agriculture are 32% of Europe and 39% of North America. On the other hand, the two biggest proportions of water usage for industrial propose are 53% of Europe and 48% of North America. This portion of water usage is less in agriculture countries, for example, people in Central Asia use water for industrial purpose only 5% of their total water usage. The domestic use is the smallest proportion of water usage over the world. The biggest proportion, which is only 19%, is at South America. In Asia, both Central Asia and South East Asia, the percentage of domestic use of water is the smallest, which is only 7%.
The pie charts
show
the
proportion
of purpose of
water
usage
from
different
six continents over the world, which are North America, South America, Europe, Africa,
Central
Asia, and South East Asia. There are three types of
water
usage
in each area, including industrial
use
, agricultural
use
, and domestic
use
.

With regards to
the percentage of
water
usage
for agriculture, it is the most at 88% of
Central
Asia, following by 84%, 81%, and 71% of Africa, South East Asia and South America,
respectively
.
Nevertheless
, the two least
proportion
of
water
usage
for agriculture are 32% of Europe and 39% of North America.

On the other hand
, the two biggest proportions of
water
usage
for industrial propose are 53% of Europe and 48% of North America. This portion of
water
usage
is less in agriculture countries,
for example
,
people
in
Central
Asia
use
water
for industrial purpose
only
5% of their total
water
usage.

The domestic
use
is the smallest
proportion
of
water
usage
over the world. The biggest
proportion
, which is
only
19%, is at South America. In Asia, both
Central
Asia and South East Asia, the percentage of domestic
use
of
water
is the smallest, which is
only
7%.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage water used fordifferent purposed in six areas of the world.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
201 words
6.5
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