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The chart below shows different methods of waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. v.2

The chart below shows different methods of waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008.
The bar chart given illustrates the information about the quantity of garbage waste in a country of Europe treated by three various methods, namely landfill, burning and dumping at the sea over the course of 3 years from 2005 to 2008. Overall the landfill witnessed a downward tendency whereas there was a gradual increase in the figure for the other treatments. In 2005, burying rubbish was the most popular usage, about 1800 million tones, tripling as popular as dumping at sea, around 600 million tones. One year later, the total trash material buried declined sharply, approximately 1200 million tones. From that time to 2008, less garbage was disposed of using this treatment than before, dropping gradually by 10 million tones annually. Meanwhile, the number of dumping in the ocean fluctuated over four-years period, falling slightly from 600 to over 500 million tones. By contrast, incineration was the least favourite method to deal with waste in 2005, recording about 45 million tones. Each over the next 3 years, the moderate rise in 100 million tones of using the heat. Subsequently, this number of 2008 continued to go up and hit a peak at 900 million tones rubbish waste by using this treatment.
The bar chart
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illustrates the information about the quantity of garbage waste in a country of Europe treated by three various methods,
namely
landfill, burning and dumping at the sea
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over
the course of 3 years from 2005 to 2008.

Overall
the landfill witnessed a downward tendency whereas there was a gradual increase in the figure for the other treatments.

In 2005, burying rubbish was the most popular usage, about 1800
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million
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tones
, tripling as popular as dumping at sea, around 600
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million
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tones
. One year later, the total trash material buried declined
sharply
, approximately 1200
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million
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tones
. From that time to 2008, less garbage
was disposed
of using this treatment than
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before
, dropping
gradually
by 10
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million
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tones
annually
. Meanwhile, the number of dumping in the ocean fluctuated
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over
four-years period, falling
slightly
from 600 to
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over
500
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million
tones.

By contrast, incineration was the least
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favourite
method to deal with waste in 2005, recording about 45
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million
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tones
. Each
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over
the
next
3 years, the moderate rise in 100
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million
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tones
of using the heat.
Subsequently
, this number of 2008 continued to go up and hit a peak at 900
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rubbish waste by using this treatment.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS academic The chart below shows different methods of waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
201 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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