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The Chart below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arrests. v.2

The Chart below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arrests. v. 2
The given circular charts highlight the information about the number of imprisoned men and women, and the bar graph illustrate the reasons of the imprisonment from the year 1990 to 1994. The data is given in per centum. Overall, it is evident that number of significant arrested men are more as compared to women, whereas, public drinking is the main factor due to which they were atrested. It can be seen that, 32% males had been, however, only less than one in ten females were arrested. Moreover, in terms of drink driving, number of males were likely to be higher(26%) than females which was just, 14% who were being arrested in this case. Furthermore, in the matter of breeach of order, number of arrested men and women were nearly 17% and 12% respectively. With regards to the remaining reasons of the imprisonment, theft case accounted for 16% of men and 12% of women, while, number of male and female being arrested for other reasons were more in comparison of it. As well as, least amount of both the gender had no reason why they were arrested.
The
given
circular charts highlight the information about the
number
of imprisoned
men
and
women
, and the bar graph illustrate the
reasons
of the imprisonment from the year 1990 to 1994. The data is
given
in per centum.

Overall
, it is evident that
number
of significant
arrested
men
are more
as
compared to
women
, whereas, public drinking is the main factor due to which they were
atrested
.

It can be
seen
that, 32% males had been,
however
,
only
less than one in ten females were
arrested
.
Moreover
, in terms of
drink driving
,
number
of males were likely to be higher(26%) than females which was
just
, 14% who were being
arrested
in this case
.
Furthermore
, in the matter of
breeach
of order,
number
of
arrested
men
and
women
were
nearly
17% and 12%
respectively
.

With regards to
the remaining
reasons
of the imprisonment, theft case accounted for 16% of
men
and 12% of
women
, while,
number
of male and female being
arrested
for other
reasons
were more
in comparison
of it.
As well
as,
least
amount of both the gender had no
reason
why they were
arrested
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS academic The Chart below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arrests. v. 2

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