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the chart below gives information about Soutland's main exports in 2000, 20. . , and future projections for 2025. v.2

the chart below gives information about Soutland's main exports in 2000, 20. . , and future projections for 2025. v. 2
The bar chart clearly illustrates the major exports of Southland including International tourism, Dairy products and meat products in 2000. 2017 and future plans for 2025. As it can be observed at the first glance that international tourism has been raised dramatically, although, meat products have been decreased consistently from 2000 to 2025. It is obviously evident that international tourism was the main export in 2000 and probably it will be in 2050 respectively 8. 1 billion and almost 10 billion in comparison with dairy products (7 billion in 2000 and 9. 5 billion in 2050) and meat products (6 billion 2000 and 5 billion). It is noticeable to mention that dairy products have been soaked from 7 billion in 2000 to nearly 10 billion in 2017 and it will drop to 9. 5 in 2050. Also, the bar chart visibly demonstrate that meat products has been consistently decreased as it was 6 billion in 2000 and it will be 5 billion in 2050. It is apparent from the bar chart that southland’s major export will spectacularly surge in 2050, while meat products have been dipped during this period. In addition, dairy products have been rocketed from 2000 to 2017 and it will drop in 2050.
The bar chart
clearly
illustrates the major exports of Southland including International tourism,
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Dairy
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products
and
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meat
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products
in 2000. 2017 and future plans for 2025. As it can
be observed
at the
first
glance that international tourism has
been raised
dramatically
, although,
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meat
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products
have
been decreased
consistently
from 2000 to 2025.

It is
obviously
evident that international tourism was the main export in 2000 and
probably
it will be in 2050
respectively
8. 1
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billion
and almost 10
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billion
in comparison
with
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dairy
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products
(7
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billion
in 2000 and 9. 5
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billion
in 2050) and
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meat
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products
(6
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billion
2000 and 5
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billion)
. It is noticeable to mention that
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dairy
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products
have
been soaked
from 7
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billion
in 2000 to
nearly
10
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billion
in 2017 and it will drop to 9. 5 in 2050.
Also
, the bar chart
visibly
demonstrate that
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meat
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products
has been
consistently
decreased as it was 6
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billion
in 2000 and it will be 5
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billion
in 2050.

It is apparent from the bar chart that
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southland
’s major export will
spectacularly
surge in 2050, while
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meat
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products
have
been dipped
during this period.
In addition
,
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dairy
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products
have
been rocketed
from 2000 to 2017 and it will drop in 2050.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS academic the chart below gives information about Soutland's main exports in 2000, 20. . , and future projections for 2025. v. 2

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3 paragraphs
206 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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