The bar graph exhibits how many people from two age groups (25-35 and 55-65) joined different clubs aimed for leisure activities in a small urban area. It is obvious that elder people preferred gardening while cycling was mostly taken up by youngsters.
The diagram suggests that over 500 people between 25 and 65 years old enrolled one of the six clubs in this municipal. Youth mostly preferred cycling as more than 65 of them registered for this association compared to 10 elder members. On the contrary, gardening was picked up by roughly 55 elder people who were between 55 and 65 years old while only 25 youths took this. Photography was equally preferred as roughly 45 people from each age group joined the photography club. Fitness centres enlisted over 100 members and 50 of them were aged inhabitants. Arts are crafts clubs collected 60 young members while only 20 elders enrolled there. Finally, music clubs got over a hundred members and young members’ number was slightly higher than that of people over 54 years old.
The bar graph exhibits how
many
people
from two age groups (25-35 and 55-65)
joined
different
clubs
aimed for leisure activities in a
small
urban area. It is obvious that
elder
people
preferred gardening while cycling was
mostly
taken up by youngsters.
The diagram suggests that
over
500
people
between 25 and 65 years
old
enrolled one of the six
clubs
in this municipal. Youth
mostly
preferred cycling as more than 65 of them registered for this association compared to 10
elder
members
.
On the contrary
, gardening
was picked
up by roughly 55
elder
people
who were between 55 and 65 years
old
while
only
25 youths took this. Photography was
equally
preferred as roughly 45
people
from each age group
joined
the photography
club
. Fitness
centres
enlisted
over
100
members
and 50 of them
were aged
inhabitants. Arts are crafts
clubs
collected 60 young
members
while
only
20
elders
enrolled there.
Finally
, music
clubs
got
over
a hundred
members
and young
members’
number was
slightly
higher than that of
people
over
54 years
old
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes