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The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001-2004. Identify the main trends and summarize the data v.2

The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001-2004. Identify the main trends and
The bar chart illustrated the amount of the student’s presence in three main courses between 2001 and 2004. It is clear that students attended in course C increasing little by little. Meanwhile, course B was subject to overall volatility over four years. In the first two years, the quantity of students was in course A was likely to decrease from 4, 3 millions to 2, 5 millions. After a slight lull, the number of students in course A tended to increase to 4. 5 millions in two year’s time. Meanwhile, there was a fluctuation in the amount of the attenders in course B and finally stood at nearly 3 millions in 2004. There was a period of stability in the figure for course C, at 2 millions in 2001 and 2002. After two years, the students were in course C saw increase to the highest point, at 5 millions in 2004.
The bar chart illustrated the amount of the
student’s
presence in three main
courses
between 2001 and 2004.

It is
clear
that
students
attended in
course
C increasing
little
by
little
. Meanwhile,
course
B was subject to
overall
volatility over four years.

In the
first
two years, the quantity of
students
was in
course
A was likely to decrease from 4, 3
millions
to 2, 5
millions
. After a slight lull, the number of
students
in
course
A tended to increase to 4. 5
millions
in two year’s time. Meanwhile, there was a fluctuation in the amount of the attenders in
course
B and
finally
stood at
nearly
3
millions
in 2004.

There was a period of stability in the figure for
course
C, at 2
millions
in 2001 and 2002. After two years, the
students
were in
course
C
saw
increase to the highest point, at 5
millions
in 2004.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001-2004. Identify the main trends and

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