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The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. v. 4

The bar graph outlines the average duration a teacher spent on three different levels in four different countries in 2001. Overall, the teaching hours at the secondary level was higher than that of primary level and the US tutors spent more time teaching than the teachers in the other three countries did. A US teacher spent more than 700 hours to teach primary students in 2001 while a Japanese educator disbursed exactly 600 hours for teaching the same graders. Time allocated to teaching elementary student by a Spanish teacher was 50 hours higher than that of Japanese teacher but it was less than 600 hours in Iceland. An American teacher’s average schooling duration in 2001 for lower secondary students was 1000 hours which was 300 to 400 hours higher than the teaching duration by a teacher in the other three countries. Finally, higher secondary students received almost 1200 hours’ lectures by a teacher in the US and this duration was noticeable higher than of other countries. In Japan, an upper secondary level teacher taught for 700 hours in 2001, almost 500 hours less than that of a US teacher. In Iceland and Spain, teaching duration by a higher secondary level teacher was approximately 900 hours, about 300 hours less than that of an American teacher.

IELTS academic The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. v.4

The bar graph outlines the average
duration
a
teacher
spent on three
different
levels
in four
different
countries
in 2001.
Overall
, the
teaching
hours
at the
secondary
level
was higher than that of primary
level
and the US tutors spent more time
teaching
than the
teachers
in the other three
countries
did. A US
teacher
spent more than 700
hours
to teach primary
students
in 2001 while a Japanese educator disbursed exactly 600
hours
for
teaching
the same graders. Time allocated to
teaching
elementary
student
by a Spanish
teacher
was 50
hours
higher than that of Japanese
teacher
but
it was less than 600
hours
in Iceland. An American
teacher’s
average schooling
duration
in 2001 for lower
secondary
students
was 1000
hours
which was 300 to 400
hours
higher than the
teaching
duration
by a
teacher
in the other three
countries
.
Finally
, higher
secondary
students
received almost 1200
hours’
lectures by a
teacher
in the US and this
duration
was noticeable higher than of other
countries
. In Japan, an upper
secondary
level
teacher
taught for 700
hours
in 2001, almost 500
hours
less than that of a US
teacher
. In Iceland and Spain,
teaching
duration
by a higher
secondary
level
teacher
was approximately 900
hours
, about 300
hours
less than that of an American
teacher
.
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