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The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. v.3

The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. v. 3
The column graph represents data on average teaching hours by each educator in 2001 in Japan, Spain, Iceland and the USA in the primary, lower secondary and higher secondary school levels. Generally speaking, a US tutor on an average spent more hours on schooling than that of Japanese, Spanish and Icelandic teachers in 2001 and the time spent on teaching increases with the class levels in all countries. According to the illustration, an instructor in Japan, Spain and Iceland typically spent around 600 hours in 2001 to teach elementary level students. This duration in the USA was the highest, roughly 750 hours. A US mentor taught lower secondary students for exactly 1000 hours in the same year and it was roughly 600 hours in Iceland and Japan. However, lower secondary teachers in Spain disbursed roughly 750 hours each to their students. Finally, the time spent to teach higher secondary pupil in the USA was approximately 1200 hours which was 300 hours less in Iceland and Spain and precisely 700 hours in Japan.
The column graph represents data on average teaching
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by each educator in 2001 in
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Japan
, Spain, Iceland and the USA in the primary, lower
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secondary
and higher
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secondary
school levels.
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speaking, a US tutor on an average
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spent
more
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hours
on schooling than that of Japanese, Spanish and Icelandic teachers in 2001 and the time
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spent
on teaching increases with the
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class
levels in all countries.

According to the illustration, an instructor in
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Japan
, Spain and Iceland
typically
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spent
around 600
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hours
in 2001 to teach elementary level students. This duration in the USA was the highest, roughly 750
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hours
. A US mentor taught lower
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secondary
students for exactly 1000
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hours
in the same year and it was roughly 600
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hours
in Iceland and
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Japan
.
However
, lower
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secondary
teachers in Spain disbursed roughly 750
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hours
each to their students.
Finally
, the time
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spent
to teach higher
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secondary
pupil in the USA was approximately 1200
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hours
which was 300
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hours
less in Iceland and Spain and
precisely
700
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hours
in
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Japan
.
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IELTS academic The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. v. 3

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