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The bar chart illustrates the frequency with which Americans ate in fast food establishments from 2003 to 2013. v.2

The bar chart illustrates the frequency with which Americans ate in fast food establishments from 2003 to 2013. v. 2
The bar chart illustrates the frequency with which Americans ate in fast food establishments from 2003 to 2013. It is clear that the majority of Americans ate in fast food restaurants between once a week and once a month in all three years. We can also see a shift towards eating in these restaurants less frequently by the end of the 10-year period. In each of the years shown on the chart, close to 60% of people in the US ate in fast food restaurants between once and four times a month. Roughly 15 to 20% of Americans reported eating in fast food outlets several times per week, while 3 to 4% of people ate in these outlets daily. At the other end of the scale, around 4% of people avoided fast food restaurants completely. Between 2006 and 2013, the total proportion of Americans who ate in fast food establishments either once a week or several times a week fell by almost 10%. At the same time, there was an increase of around 8% in the ‘once or twice a month’ category. In other words, the weekly fast food habit that was common in 2003 and 2006 became a monthly or twice monthly habit in 2013.
The bar chart illustrates the frequency with which Americans
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establishments from 2003 to 2013.

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that the majority of Americans
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and
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a month in all three years. We can
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a shift towards eating in these
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of the 10-year period.

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in the US
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a month. Roughly 15 to 20% of Americans reported eating in
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outlets several
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per
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, while 3 to 4% of
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in these outlets daily. At the other
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of the scale, around 4% of
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avoided
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completely.

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establishments either
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or several
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fell by almost 10%. At the same
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, there was an increase of around 8% in the
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‘once
or twice a month’ category.
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, the weekly
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habit that was common in 2003 and 2006 became a monthly or twice monthly habit in 2013.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the frequency with which Americans ate in fast food establishments from 2003 to 2013. v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
206 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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