The bar graph shows average price the European Union (EU) spent for per kilometre clothing import from six different years in 1993 and 2003. It is obvious that the EU paid the highest amount for each kilometre costume to Argentina.
According to the illustration, the EU spent the highest amount for clothing import from Argentina which was approximately 28 pounds per kilometre in 1993. This rate was significantly higher; almost 9 times higher than the rate it gave to Bangladesh. The second and third highest rates were given to Brazil and Japan, roughly 23 and 15 pounds respectively. China and India got less than that and their rate was higher than the import rate from Bangladesh. The latter received only around 3 pound per kilo which was almost three times less than the rate paid to Japan.
The rate went higher in 2003 for China, India and Bangladesh who were the least paid countries in a decade earlier. The price for costume import from Brazil remained unchanged while slightly declined for Argentina and Japan. Despite the price changes, Argentina and Brazil were still highly paid than that of India and Bangladesh while China’s price went as high as 17 pounds, almost double than that of 1993’s rate.
The bar graph
shows
average
price
the European Union (EU) spent for per
kilometre
clothing
import
from six
different
years in 1993 and 2003. It is obvious that the EU
paid
the highest amount for each
kilometre
costume to Argentina.
According to the illustration, the EU spent the highest amount for clothing
import
from Argentina which was approximately
28 pounds
per
kilometre
in 1993. This
rate
was
significantly
higher; almost 9 times higher than the
rate
it gave to Bangladesh. The second and third highest
rates
were
given
to Brazil and Japan, roughly 23 and
15 pounds
respectively
. China and India
got
less than that and their
rate
was higher than the
import
rate
from Bangladesh. The latter received
only
around
3 pound
per kilo which was almost three times less than the
rate
paid
to Japan.
The
rate
went higher in 2003 for China, India and Bangladesh who were the least
paid
countries in a decade earlier.
The
price
for costume
import
from Brazil remained unchanged while
slightly
declined for Argentina and Japan. Despite the
price
changes
, Argentina and Brazil were
still
highly
paid
than that of India and Bangladesh while China’s
price
went as high as
17 pounds
, almost
double
than that of 1993’s
rate
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes