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Task 1: The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. v.2

Task 1: The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. v. 2
The charts compared the proportion of average household expenses in a nation between 1950 and 2010. It is clear that spending on healthcare was by far lowest during the research period. Additionally, the nation witnessed the most dramatic change in the rate for housing. In 1950, the percentage of housing cost was highest, at 72. 1 % of the total household expenditure, while the figure for food was significantly lower, at only 11. 2%. Meanwhile, the proportion of spending on education and healthcare and education accounted for 2. 4% and 6. 6% respectively, compared to 3. 3% of the total cost spent on transportation. In 2010, the proportion of expenditure on food experienced a significant increase to 34%, became the highest figure in the pie chart. The figure for healthcare slightly risen to 4. 5%, whereas the rate for transportation remarkably grown to 14%. By contrast, the percentage of expenditure on housing significantly decreased by roughly 50% to 22%.
The charts compared the proportion of average household expenses in a nation between 1950 and 2010. It is
clear
that spending on healthcare was by far lowest during the research period.
Additionally
, the nation witnessed the most dramatic
change
in the rate for housing.

In 1950, the percentage of housing cost was highest, at 72. 1 % of the total household expenditure, while the figure for food was
significantly
lower, at
only
11. 2%. Meanwhile, the proportion of spending on education and healthcare and education accounted for 2. 4% and 6. 6%
respectively
, compared to 3. 3% of the total cost spent on transportation.

In 2010, the proportion of expenditure on food experienced a significant increase to 34%, became the highest figure in the pie chart. The figure for healthcare
slightly
risen to 4. 5%, whereas the rate for transportation
remarkably
grown to 14%. By contrast, the percentage of expenditure on housing
significantly
decreased by roughly 50% to 22%.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic Task 1: The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. v. 2

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
159 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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