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Please tell me How can I upload picture and give your suggestions in my essay. The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the informa v.2

Please tell me How can I upload picture and give your suggestions in my essay. The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the informa v. 2
the given charts compare the different way of behavior with hazardous waste and how many wastes produce five types of industries in three countries in 2000 overall, The USA buried its hazardous industrial wastes in landfills more than disposal and recycled them while in Malaysia, and England' s most popular way was disposal waste. The USA was the biggest waste producer in 2000, with a higher amount of waste in the Plastic Bag industry. Besides, Malaysia and the U. K. have the highest amount of waste products as same as the USA in the Plastic bag industry. Regarding the pie chart, half of the dangerous waste in America buried in a landfill while in the U. K. and Malaysia, only 15% and 30% of their waste buried in a landfill. 45% of waste in the U. K. and Malaysia was the disposal of waste. Meanwhile, 20% of waste in America was disposal. The highest rate of industrial waste in America, the U. K. , and Malaysia were the industrial plastic bag with 60mt, 50mt, and 32 mt, respectively. In 2000, the lowest number in the U. K. (7mt) and America (14) was in Electronic waste while in Malaysia produce clinical waste was lowest at 9%. the second-highest amount of waste in America was industrial chemical at 50mt in 2000 while in the U. K. , and Malaysia dangerous waste in industrial chemical was 20mt and 10 mt respectively.
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IELTS academic Please tell me How can I upload picture and give your suggestions in my essay. The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the informa v. 2

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4 paragraphs
238 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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