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Nowadays many medical research projects are funded by private companies In your opinion do you think that research should be carried out by private companies individuals or government v.2

Nowadays many medical research projects are funded by private companies In your opinion do you think that research should be carried out by private companies individuals or government v. 2
Nowadays, many medical research projects are funded by companies. In my opinion, I am going to talk about the fact that private companies and individual researchers can improve the medial lives of people more governments Firstly, private companies are a good way to enhance medical research, but the government should be peering the companies, because, as you know, private companies always care about profits without caring the quality. Provided that the government peers over other companies, private companies could achieve good quality or standard. For example, when you find out about good private companies, you will find private companies which are peered under the government. According to the opinion of many people, I personally agree with the opinion of many people, in that private companies which support researchers do well, because these companies support and care for the researcher. These companies always attempts to create and discover new invention in order to share this knowledge with other companies around the world In contrast, people who work as individuals may work with a better mental mindset, not experiencing less stress because any inventor needs a relaxing life in order to invent new medical inventions. As you know, creating new medical inventions is not easy - it is very complex. This is why inventors need a relaxing life to be successful in their endeavors. To sum up, I have talked with researchers who work with private companies and with those who have done research as individual and researchers are happier
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medical
research projects
are funded
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companies
. In my opinion, I am going to talk about the fact that
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private
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companies
and individual
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researchers
can
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improve
the medial
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lives
of
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people
more
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governments


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,
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private
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companies
are a
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good
way to enhance
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medical
research,
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but
the
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government
should be peering the
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companies
,
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because
, as you know,
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private
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companies
always care about profits without caring the quality. Provided that the
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government
peers over other
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companies
,
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private
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companies
could achieve
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good
quality or standard.
For example
, when you find out about
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good
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private
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companies
, you will find
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private
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companies
which
are peered
under the
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government
.

According to the opinion of
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many
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people
, I
personally
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agree
with the opinion of
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many
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people
, in that
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private
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companies
which support
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researchers
do well,
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because
these
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companies
support and care for the
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researcher
. These
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companies
always attempts to create and discover new invention in order to share this knowledge with other
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companies
around the
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world


In contrast
,
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people
who work as individuals may work with a better mental mindset, not experiencing less
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stress
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because
any inventor needs a relaxing life in order to invent new
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medical
inventions. As you know, creating new
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medical
inventions is not easy
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-
it is
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very
complex. This is why inventors need a relaxing life to be successful in their endeavors.

To sum up, I have talked with
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researchers
who work with
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private
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companies
and with those who have done research as individual and
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researchers
are happier
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35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS academic Nowadays many medical research projects are funded by private companies In your opinion do you think that research should be carried out by private companies individuals or government v. 2

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
247 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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