Most students have homework to at home after learning at school. So obviously that they are expected study more at home. This trend could be both benefit and adverse.
Studying both in and after school will help students to have basic knowledge of any subject. So that they will easily get good marks in examinations.
that is the advantages, what about the disadvantages of this trend. studying both in and afer school means that students will have to devoted a huge amount of time to do it. in my opinion, spending excessive study time might cause negative effects on both children and the society. young people tend to getting tired and bored after studying for a while. they feel less happier and may suffer psychological of mental illness. even worse, some data show that the rising rate of suicide and anti society behavior could be the consequence of this matter. thus, spending too much time studying make children lose the opportunities for socialize through outdoor activities. it also have a huge impact to the society like causing lower employment rate. student will lack of fundamental communication skills, interpersonal skills and team work.
in conclusion, studying both in and after school can benefit but it also be a huge impact to children' s life.
Most
students
have homework to at home after learning at
school
.
So
obviously
that they are
expected
study more at home. This trend could be both benefit and adverse.
Studying both in and after
school
will
help
students
to have basic knowledge of any subject.
So that
they will
easily
get
good
marks in examinations.
that
is the advantages, what about the disadvantages of this trend.
studying
both in and
afer
school
means that
students
will have
to devoted
a huge amount of time to do it. in my opinion, spending excessive study time might cause
negative
effects on both children and the society.
young
people
tend to getting tired and bored after
studying
for a while.
they
feel
less happier
and may suffer psychological of mental illness.
even
worse,
some
data
show
that the rising rate of suicide and anti society behavior could be the consequence of this matter.
thus
, spending too much time
studying
make
children lose the opportunities for socialize through outdoor activities.
it
also
have
a huge impact to the society like causing lower employment rate.
student
will lack of fundamental communication
skills
, interpersonal
skills
and team work.
in
conclusion,
studying
both in and after
school
can benefit
but
it
also
be
a huge impact to
children&
#039; s life.
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