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Homework is a part of school life. Many people feel that giving homework daily to school children works well for them, while some feel it is an unnecessary burden on them. What do you think about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant e v.2

Homework is a part of school life. Many people feel that giving homework daily to school children works well for them, while some feel it is an unnecessary burden on them. What do you think about it? 2
There is no doubt that homework is becoming an indispensable part of children' s education. Some people argue that homework helps children enormously whereas other think that it is a burden on them. In spite of its drawbacks, I believe that daily homework should be given to children. In the first place, doing exercises is an efficient way to review and get more understanding. Obviously, " practice makes perfect" . After lessons, children do their assignments to reinforce the learnt knowledge as well as answer the difficult questions about the teacher' s lecture by themselves. Besides, 45 minutes is not enough time for teachers to teach all the studying methods. Thus, some parts of a lecture are often given to students as homework. It means if they work hard, they will understand lesson more deeply and get better results. Apart from that, free time is able to be used more positively by doing homework. After school time, children have a lot of spare time and the activities they often do at that time are playing games or chatting with their friends on Facebook. In fact, these activities are not absolutely good for their health. Therefore, doing assignments helps control their time. Moreover, it also gives insight among students about the importance of education in life. Consequently, they will be more responsible for their studying as well as they will arrange a suitable timetable to learn. Last but not least, homework is a means of checking student' s patience and passion. Indeed, among exercises, there are some difficult forms which only students having endurance and interest with the subject can find the solutions. As a matter of fact, many students determine to spend more time solving their matter and then they find new ways that are much shorter and more creative. In other words, doing assignments also encourages children to expand their creativity. To sum up, it is essential for teachers to give daily exercises to students. However, they ought to give homework to them in a certain limitation, don' t make homework become an unnecessary burden on children.
There is no doubt that
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homework
is becoming an indispensable part of
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children&
#039; s education.
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Some
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people
argue that
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homework
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helps
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children
enormously
whereas other
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think
that it is a burden on them.
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In spite of
its drawbacks, I believe that daily
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homework
should be
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given
to children.

In the
first
place,
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doing
exercises is an efficient way to review and
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get
more understanding.
Obviously
,
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; practice
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makes
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perfect&quot
;
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.
After lessons,
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children
do their assignments to reinforce the
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learnt
knowledge
as well
as answer the difficult questions about the
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teacher&
#039; s lecture by themselves.
Besides
, 45 minutes is not
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enough
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time
for teachers to teach all the studying methods.
Thus
,
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some
parts of a lecture are
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often
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given
to
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students
as
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homework
. It means if they work
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hard
, they will understand lesson more
deeply
and
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get
better results.

Apart from that, free
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time
is able to be
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used
more
positively
by
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doing
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homework
. After school
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time
,
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children
have
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a lot of
spare
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time
and the activities they
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often
do at that
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time
are playing games or chatting with their friends on Facebook. In fact, these activities are not
absolutely
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good
for their health.
Therefore
,
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doing
assignments
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helps
control their
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time
.
Moreover
, it
also
gives insight among
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students
about the importance of education in life.
Consequently
, they will be more responsible for their studying
as well
as they will arrange a suitable timetable to learn.

Last
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but
not least,
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homework
is a means of checking
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student&
#039; s patience and passion.
Indeed
, among exercises, there are
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some
difficult forms which
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only
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students
having endurance and interest with the subject can find the solutions. As a matter of fact,
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many
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students
determine to spend more
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time
solving their
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matter and
then they find new ways that are much shorter and more creative.
In other words
,
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doing
assignments
also
encourages
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children
to expand their creativity.

To sum up, it is essential for teachers to give daily exercises to
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students
.
However
, they ought to give
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homework
to them in a certain limitation,
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don&
#039; t
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make
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homework
become an unnecessary burden on
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children
.
17Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS academic Homework is a part of school life. Many people feel that giving homework daily to school children works well for them, while some feel it is an unnecessary burden on them. What do you think about it? 2

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
348 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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