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The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works
The diagram demonstrates the operational procedure of a solar powered water pump which is used to supply water to a village. There are three main components in the system, namely; solar panel photo-voltaic cells, underground bore or well and the water storage tank. The major source of energy to the system is the sun. The first step in the process is capturing and storing solar energy in the photo-voltaic cells in the solar panel which is located directing the incident rays of the sun. The panel is mounted on a pole which is placed above the ground level. The next step is transmission of direct current from the photo-voltaic cells to the bore pump in the underground bore or well. Finally, water is pumped to the water retention tank above the ground through a pipe line fixed to the bore cap. This water remains in the tank until it is distributed for the consumption of the villagers.
The diagram demonstrates the operational procedure of a
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pump which is
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to supply
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to a village. There are three main components in the system,
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panel photo-voltaic cells, underground
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storage tank.

The major source of energy to the system is the sun. The
first
step in the process is capturing and storing
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energy in the photo-voltaic cells in the
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panel which
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directing the incident rays of the sun.
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above the ground level.
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from the photo-voltaic cells to the
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pump in the underground
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bore
or well.
Finally
,
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water
is pumped
to the
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water
retention tank above the ground through a pipe line
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cap. This
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remains in the tank until it
is distributed
for the consumption of the villagers.
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