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Computers are increasingly used in education. In which areas do you think are computers more important and in which areas are teachers more important? v.4

Computers are increasingly used in education. In which areas do you think are computers more important and in which areas are teachers more important? v. 4
computers have been playing an essential role in the field of education in recent years. Although it cannot be denied the positive outcome when applying computer in educational environment, there are certain areas of education which computer cannot replace a traditional teacher. On one hand, there are cases when computers use is necessary. Regarding the course of computer learning for students who study high school or below in some countries, computer is a vital tool for those to practice. it is considered as an indispensable mean to reinforce the student’s knowledge related to the lesson. By interacting directly on the computer, learners will be able to understand the lecture thoroughly and remember it longer. Furthermore, students whose majors are it or film editor are in need of the use of computers. Without the computers, it is hardly to imagine how those learners are going to interprete the lectures. On the other hand, teachers can hardly be replaced by computer in subjects required reasoning. To illustrate, computer is able to solve a mathematics issue from easy to elementary quickly in few seconds, however, it is impossible to give the reason to the answer. In the contrary, human teachers can explain to learners why things is happened that way and show students the method to accomplish the task. These are things that computers cannot do as they are only programmed to provided accurate answer. Moreover, making use of computers in areas such as researching case studies is almost impractical due to the reason that a case study requires researchers to use their logical mind rather than computer. In conclusion, computers is beneficial to education, but in some circumstances, it benefits should not be taken into account, and the role of a human teacher is irreplaceable in such cases.
computers
have been playing an essential role in the field of education in recent years. Although it cannot
be denied
the
positive
outcome when applying computer in educational environment, there are certain areas of education which computer cannot replace a traditional teacher.

On one hand, there are cases when computers
use
is necessary. Regarding the course of computer learning for
students
who study high school or below in
some
countries, computer is a vital tool for those to practice.
it
is considered
as an indispensable mean to reinforce the
student’s
knowledge related to the lesson. By interacting
directly
on the computer, learners will be able to understand the lecture
thoroughly
and remember it longer.
Furthermore
,
students
whose majors are it or film editor are in need of the
use
of computers. Without the computers, it is hardly to imagine how those learners are going to
interprete
the lectures.

On the other hand
, teachers can hardly
be replaced
by computer in subjects required reasoning. To illustrate, computer is able to solve a mathematics issue from easy to elementary
quickly
in few seconds,
however
, it is impossible to give the reason to the answer. In the contrary, human teachers can
explain
to learners why things
is happened
that way and
show
students
the method to accomplish the task. These are things that computers cannot do as they are
only
programmed to provided accurate answer.
Moreover
, making
use
of computers in areas such as researching case studies is almost impractical due to the reason that a case study requires researchers to
use
their logical mind
rather
than computer.

In conclusion
, computers is beneficial to education,
but
in
some
circumstances, it benefits should not
be taken
into account, and the role of a human teacher is irreplaceable in such cases.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic Computers are increasingly used in education. In which areas do you think are computers more important and in which areas are teachers more important? v. 4

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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