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39. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2

39. With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
Technology facilitates our lives in many aspects, including education. It is a self-evident fact, that with the help of technology, nowadays, students can learn more and even learn faster. They can learn everything online. Also, they can carry out scientific experiments to test what they have learned. It is also good to be mentioned that technology prepares us more free time to learn. The most influential service of technology in the matter of education is to accessiblize various sources of knowledge to all people. Nowadays everybody can find the newest studies and researches in any field we can think of. And this is a significant help for everyone who is seeking knowledge. In the past, just a few people have the chance to participate in authentic educational classes and find scientific books to learn but, today there are online classes and e-books. People can easily use their phone and read scientific texts or enroll in online classes, no matter they live. Moreover, there are lots of learning assist tools, like advanced telescopes, that anyone who is interested to learn about stars and other planets can use. With the help of technology, individuals can allocate more time for learning. Technology has remarkably changed our lifestyle from what it used to be. people used to exert a lot of time and energy for simple tasks, now those tasks can be done much easier and of course faster. Technology has evaporated every excuse for the lack of knowledge for students. Nowadays, technology not only provides us with every possible need for learning but also give us more time to learn. Therefore, every enthusiastic student who is eager to learn is having what they need in this path.
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Technology
facilitates our
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lives
in
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many
aspects, including education. It is a self-evident fact, that with the
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help
of
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technology
, nowadays, students can
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learn
more and even
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learn
faster. They can
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learn
everything online.
Also
, they can carry out scientific experiments to
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test
what they have learned. It is
also
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good
to
be mentioned
that
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technology
prepares us more free
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time
to learn.

The most influential service of
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technology
in the matter of education is to
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accessiblize
various sources of knowledge to all
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people
. Nowadays everybody can find the newest studies and researches in any field we can
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think
of. And this is a significant
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help
for everyone who is seeking knowledge. In the past,
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just
a few
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people
have the chance to participate in authentic educational classes and find scientific books to
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learn
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but
,
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today
there are online classes and e-books.
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People
can
easily
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use
their phone and read scientific texts or enroll in online classes, no matter they
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live
.
Moreover
, there are lots of learning assist tools, like advanced telescopes, that anyone who
is interested
to
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learn
about stars and other planets can
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use
. With the
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help
of
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technology
, individuals can allocate more
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time
for learning.

Technology has
remarkably
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changed
our lifestyle from what it
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used
to be.
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people
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used
to exert
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a lot of
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time
and energy for simple tasks,
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now
those tasks can
be done
much easier and
of course
faster.

Technology has evaporated every excuse for the lack of knowledge for students. Nowadays,
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technology
not
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only
provides us with every possible need for learning
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but
also
give us more
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time
to
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learn
.
Therefore
, every enthusiastic student who is eager to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
is having what they need in this path.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS academic 39. With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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