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Write about a problem that you have at school.

Write about a problem that you have at school. aldew
When I first started high school, I couldn't keep up with my new classmates. I felt the heat of pressure and stress of learning more than ever. Because I am a gifted student, I am generally exposed to invisible pressure from friends and strangers, such as "She must study extremely hard" or "She is a bookworm. " Because my schoolmates are so good, there was a lot of peer pressure that made it difficult for me to adjust to the new study atmosphere. Despite my best efforts to study, I did not obtain the grade I expected. I had doubts about my decisions and ability at times, and I was on the verge of losing myself. I was worried and didn't think I'd be able to learn anything. I've also spoken with my closest friend, a gifted student, since I don't want to remain in that position any longer. We were both anxious at the moment, so we had a lot to speak about. I was able to fully recover from my mental health condition after conversing at midnight. To get out of this situation, we frequently communicate unknown knowledge about lessons with one another. I achieved higher grades at school than I expected, learnt numerous beneficial learning strategies for myself, and most importantly, I regained my confidence in studying.
When I
first
started
high school, I couldn't
keep
up with my new classmates. I felt the heat of pressure and
stress
of learning more than ever.
Because
I am a gifted student, I am
generally
exposed to invisible pressure from friends and strangers, such as
"
She
must
study
extremely
hard
"
or
"
She is a bookworm.
"
Because
my schoolmates are
so
good
, there was
a lot of peer
pressure that made it difficult for me to adjust to the new study atmosphere. Despite my best efforts to study, I did not obtain the grade I
expected
. I had doubts about my decisions and ability at times, and I was on the verge of losing myself. I
was worried
and didn't
think
I'd be able to learn anything.
I
've
also
spoken with my closest friend, a gifted student, since I don't want to remain in that position any longer. We were both anxious at the moment,
so
we had a lot to speak about. I was able to
fully
recover from my mental health condition after conversing at midnight. To
get
out of this situation, we
frequently
communicate unknown knowledge about lessons with one another. I achieved higher grades at school than I
expected
,
learnt
numerous beneficial learning strategies for myself, and most
importantly
, I regained my confidence in studying.
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